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Take responsibility.
Here we have a young woman being fucked by two supposed mature males, yet neither man has considered birth control. The author has neither mentioned nor implied the use of condoms the pill or if either man has had a vasectomy.
It seems that writers of modern erotica have forgotten that they have a vestige of responsibility to ensure that their readers do not approach sex with the same cavalier attitude portrayed by their characters.
As this author is female, I would have expected her to advocate some control.
4/5
Once again . . .
I cannot stress enough your need of using a Spell Checker/Grammar Checker! Your writing and storyline is too good to cause distractions due to numerous errors. Please take your reader's advice. Chapter three should follow soon involving Uncle Rob.
Take Sally's advice
This story was so hot how could anyone be distracted by a misspelled word or two? Take Sally's advice and fuck them all! It's the story that counts, the rest is just letters on the page.
Re: Take Sally's advice
How could anyone be distracted by a misspelled word or two, you ask? Maybe because some have an education. Maybe some like to see a well put together story instead of the garbage that the mindless zombies on here seem to like.
To "Anonymous"
I'm sure you make good use of your sheepskin from college! Hold on to it while reading this story again. At least one hand will be full.
Smile! You know I'm cute!
rafman88
I didn't mention birth control or condoms, mainly because I'm pretty sure it was covered in chapter 1. As consenting adults I think most people are smart enough to use condoms and birth control. In this day and age, I think everyone uses condoms. If they're not they're just fools, playing Russian roulette. I was sure that I did a spell and grammar check on this before I listed it but I will take better care the next time. Sorry for the distractions and I hope it won't deter you from reading my future submissions.
Great Story!
Ok use spell check, BUT really who cares when my pussy gets this wet and hot and throbbing. Really nice action, now add the Uncle so she can get all 3 holes stuffed. Love a good slut for Daddy!!! and his friends and family
just grat
TY vary much sally is one hot woman looking forward to more .Just love sally I We all mead more of the same TY VERYmuch yours leann mawh xxxx
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