All Comments on 'Daddys One'

A well crafted scene, evocative and erotic. Good descriptive writing and rendering of the sex scene. Short but very sweet.

Thank you...I enjoyed your writing. Milk is such fun!

More please.

Stu

I like this story. It is simple and raw. None of the 2 or 3 pages of romantic filler that one tends to skip through anyway. And it is such a turn on how he "growls." The growling is so masculine and rough and yet has a softness too, indicating how much he wants her and needs her in order to be fulfilled. And then my favorites are always a daddy and daughter story. Mmmmmm, especially a daddy sucking the milk from his daughters tits.

The story should have described her being fucked more and the actual taking of her body should be described more. Story was hot but to short.