Annie Babysits the Kids Ch. 07

Thanks for comments and sorry for taking so long...

I want to thank those who have sent comments (good and bad) on the stories and to verify I am still around and writing. My job has me travel back and forth east and west coasts of the US weekly, so have little free time to write. This summer I no longer have to travel and will hopefully have more time.

A few stray thoughts about this chapter...

Coming up with a description of Annies tattoo, I had to draw it out to describe it adequately, so for those interested (since I did not want an illustrated story), let me know and I can post a link to the image.

Secondly the soundtrack in the story hopefully synchs up with the story. As with Lap Dancing Girlfriend I write with MP3s playing in the background. When a song brings an image or scene to my mind I write it down to incorporate in the story. If you read while listening to the songs in order, hopefully the scenes match up to the songs. It's why I went to some trouble mentioning each one.

Finally, thought about breaking this into several sub-chapters (as with Chapter 3) due to its length; however, most people preferred to have one chapter instead of broken up (based again on comments with Ch. 03) so took a bit longer to finish completely instead of divvying out several sub-chapters.

Again apologize for the long wait for those who have been interested in the continuing story. Ive begun writing Chapter 8...hopefully it will be out before next year! Enjoy this chapter and hope it was worth the wait!

Fantastic

Great to finally see the pool party! There were a few places where you accidentally used Brian's name instead of Bob's. It was also quite verbose, but you painted the picture so well that that's very forgivable. Excellent addition to the Annie series.

I hope Brian's parents being away turns out great too! Will she get punished for making love with Bob?

the best writing style

seen on literotica. I enjoy the story eventhough I hate drugs but it fits the story so it's acceptable.

the only wormwood is that Bob is way to passive. the kids denying her to fuck her fiancee and besides the last scene which I was happy for, she did it and he knew and accepted it.

doesn't make sense if he want's some fun too.

also Rick way to dumb and hillabilly. with a porn movie made and selling how should Bob not find out ? the same with the kids. she almost willingly does anything they want so why risk everyhting that would bring them in jail ?

Bob should start taking more control so she can develop the way you want. otherwise you need another year to write the next chapter, so the disaster doesn't end your story before you got where you wanted it.

or let her open up to Bob so they can develop toghether.

but it gets to unrealistic having now a pornstar walking around in a hooker outfit in a small town without everybody knowing.

good luck good story

Oops...

Damn, I missed where I used Brian versus Bob's name...my apologies. I particularly look for mistakes like that repeatedly and somehow missed them (annoys me when others do it as well!). Will post a corrected version...

In terms of the other comment of Annie being discovered due to the movie, it hasn't been made public yet...and I already have thoughts on that in the next chapter...

Very good story. I hope to be lucky enough to read the following chapter soon.

Corrected version up

Think I caught all the "oops" with the name issues. Took a while to get it updated due to the upload getting corrupted twice before being posted...

Excellent story, well written. I hope the next chapter will come soon.

One of the best stories I have ever read and I have read many

Desperately hope you continue this one!

Definitely continuing...but pressed for time

Right now moving and closing on a new house, so time is very limited. I'm hoping things will settle down in the next couple months and I'll be able to get Chapter 8 up! Also working on a couple other projects...but right now time is the main issue!

excellent

I hope the next chapter will come soon and I am sur it will be kinky as hell. Did annie go to college, she might be able to wear there her favorite heels, stockings and (short) skirt ?

@Anonymous

There will definitely be more chapters...I just recently bought a house and am settling in there so it has taken away from my writing quite a bit. I have one story I am wanting to finish as well as a possible Halloween story before I hit Annie again...so hopefully I'll be getting something out soon!

OH YEAH!!!!!

Okay I read this whole story all 7 chapters with my wife, thank you man best sex in years. Can't wait for the rest keep kinky but real.

@Anonymous

LOL, glad you BOTH could enjoy it! ;)

Things have been hectic here buying a new house and moving to a new state and new job, so my writing time has been hit big time. Still plan a COUPLE chapters of Annie, but just haven't had time to sit down and do much.

I've also started a couple other stories and so need to get them done as well. I appreciate the feedback from people, so please keep it coming...it makes finding time writing worth it to know there are people out there who like my stories!

I hope i could read the next chapter of the most kinky story of the web very soon. It's an amazing job that you have done here Doccis. May be Annie's masters will go on "tourmenting" her in all the aspect of her "normal" life. Once again, great story and amazing job.

fantastic

so good, words fail me!

Thanks again!

Thanks again for all the comments and e-mails! YES I am still writing and continuing the series, it's just real life has taken a firm hold and in the last few months I've started a new job, bought a house and moved, and a whole other list of things interfering with writing :(

I hope to finish the third chapter of my Lapdancing Girlfriend series plus another story I started a while ago and then working on Annie...so no I haven't faded from the site and yes, I am still writing!

OMG, Awesome!!

I can't wait for the week at the strauss's.
Also, I am thinking about how annie will get off the hook from the boys. The garage gang obviously won't be that hard to manage. And I am hoping Ann will become a Famous pornstar. As u r the writer I can't do anything but hope. ;-)

@Anonymous

Thanks for the feedback! Things have gotten slowed down as I've been trying to get my Lapdancing Ch03 out (hopefully this coming weekend!). Have 4 other stories I've been working on but real life just doesn't allow a lot of time for writing.

Hope to get Annie house-sitting soon! Have a full weekend for her!

This is a fantastic story

I was hooked from the first chapter and i'm always on the look-out for the next chapter.Please continue soon.I can barely wait to see what happens next.

Thanks!

Thanks for the comment! I am DEFINITELY going to continue the story, although I know it's been a year since I last added a chapter.

I am currently in the middle of 3 stories that I want to get out before hitting Annie again, so it will be a while, but hopefully not too long.

My Lapdancing Girlfriend series I am on a roll with, so do not want to loose the momentum on that, so working on it. Annie will be the next big thing as I want to get the house-sitting and a few more chapters done soon!

Very Good

I hope I may read the next chapter very soon.

Absolutely amazing!!

Listen, you just have to continue writing, you are incredably good at it!! This is one of the hottest story I've read on this site, and you sure have a competition, trust me!

Really looking forward to the next chapters(!!) Keep it going!!

Thanks again!

Definitely continuing the story. Just finished Lapdancing Ch. 04 and submitted it. Currently have several series outstanding, so trying to finish a few to get some of them off my plate. Now that I've finished Lapdancing 04, may return to Annie for a bit...all depends where my Muse takes me!

Thanks for the feedback, and be sure to check my profile as I try to keep everybody up to date on what I'm working on!

please over a year!!!

Please!!!

anymore

i guess no more annie is over 1 and 1/2 years, so sorry best story on the site

Haven't given up!

I haven't given up on Annie...lately have been working on my Skyrim, Lapdancing, and other stories. I have started on Annie, but with my limited time, have been trying to finish one of my series to get it off my plate...and was working on it being Dreams or Lapdancing...though as I said, still have hopes to get Annie a few more chapters soon!

Lol cuckold fiance

You have this story seriously mislabelled, should rather be in "Noncon/Reluctant" or "Loving Wives" category. Can't see why anyone would want to stay engaged to her though, what with the kind of action she is getting...

Unless she spends 20 hours a day, 365 days a week, she will be reamed out enough to feel loose when doublefisting each of her holes...

Sorry Doc, you said you "share art"... Well you don't fucking hang your Rembrandt, Dali or frigging Mona Lisa in the NY subway right? The "art" will be damaged and/or stolen from you, what ever happens first, and you can be damn sure next guy will value the "art" a whole hell of a lot more, not giving it up for abuse... =)

Feel free to bring over your Mrs. though, would love to have a piece shared lol... ;)

Mattias (Sweden)

I hop the next chapter will be kinky as hell, with a lot a public humiliation, stockings, heels, and young studs dominating Annie.

@Anonymous...

Next chapter (which I am planning after the holidays), will definitely have that all and more. She will be at the mercy of the two boys for the whole week, and they will not hold back anything happening to her! ;)

@MattAker: In terms of the categories, I am trying to keep the story in the same category for each chapter. It really doesn't fit in "Loving Wives" because currently, they are NOT married, and depending on your definition for that category, it doesn't belong. It also doesn't entirely fit into the Non-consent category because as the story plays out, she eventually IS consenting and not reluctant. The theme that does stay true is her having sex with multiple people, hence the "group" category.

As to the rest, it's all opinion, so no reason to state anything in one regard to the other...

I am sure the next chapter is going to be legendary. Maybe as kinky as the first three (five actually). I can't wait.

wow still no update

great story but another dead storie on this site

Not dead...but in a deep sleep....

I post updates on my profile, so hope people visit it...I try to update what's going on with all the stories at least once a month so nobody thinks I faded away.

The short of it is real life has hit me this month due to work, family, and friends. I also had a bit of writer's block with my Lapdancing series. My plan is to finish Lapdancing 05, get a Skyrim story out, and then get back to Annie. No timetable, but my New Years resolution was to get some Annie chapters done this year since she's been idle for so long...

Love it!

This series is the best. I like all your work, but I really can't wait for the next chapter here.

I hope you come through with your New Years resolution!

Thanks

Please continue!

I'd like to see a continuation of this series that takes place on Annie's wedding day or maybe shortly thereafter. Annie has decided to put everything behind her and be a faithful wife. Unfortunately, Brian and William have other ideas. . .

Definitely continuing!

I've been updating my profile with progress on all my stories, and have since started a blog where I can keep things more up-to-date. Annie will definitely be continuing this year...I've made a New Year's Resolution to get back to her, LOL!

As to wedding, well, that's Chapter 13 or 14! :p

Sorry

I read on your blog that you've hit a bit of a rough patch. I hope everything works ok.

Appreciated...

Thanks for the well wishes. Not one of my best weeks in my life. It is sad when a car wreck in your new car is the LEAST of what happened. Hoping for the best, and trying to keep my chin held high. Hopefully I can get lost in writing to take my mind off things, but wanted to let everybody know where I was in terms of writing status...

I hope you didn't quite on Annie. She is by far your best caracter. She needs do have to other slutty things, with slutty clothes (stockings, helles, short skirt, collar...) in school, in the mall, at the movies... with the twins or other pervert boys.

@deedolito

I definitely have NOT given up on Annie, although I realize it's been 2 years since I worked on her last :(

Per my blog (URL in profile), my goal is to get Chapter 05 of Lapdancing Girlfriend out by the end of April (this week), then get another chapter of my Skyrim story out (Ch. 03), and then finally revisit Annie.

I have a good outline of ALL of Annie's chapters, and am planning on at LEAST 12-15 chapters for her in all (including the ones I've already published). A few of those chapters have moved into Lapdancing Girlfriend, as they dealt more with strip clubs and such and I plan on Annie to be done differently, but expect to see more by end of summer (US)!

Cool

It is good news. Thanks for your answer.

did u start working on annie yet?

did u start working on annie yet?

Best series on literotica

This is my favorite series on literotica. I mostly monitor your blog for Annie updates, although lapdancing ch. 5 is great. I would love for the next annie chapter but understand you need to write what inspires you. Your ideas for new stories sound exciting and I look forward to reading them.

Thanks everybody!

I appreciate all the comments (even if I don't reply to them for a while). I am active on my blog site which I've mentioned if people are interested in updates on what I'm working on (URL in profile).

I DO plan on continuing Annie and have a portion of Chapter 08 already written, but as mentioned above, sometimes my Muse takes me where it will and right now it's on something new...but hopefully Annie will be seeing a chapter before the end of the year!

I think annie should be dress in a very kinky and submissive way. She might be wearing high heels, stockings and collar and, yes, plug.
She might have to go to the boys school and be tied up with handcuff, collar, leash, with a mask, and used there. She migt have to do "challenges" at home and at school.
She might have to come back from the school to home in a very inappropriate outfit (and she might still be tied under it, unable to defend herself against strangers offense).

Thanks!

Thanks for the ideas...you're the second one to recommend a butt plug for her, hehehe...I may have to "fit" that in for Chapter 08, LOL!

Not sure about the school bit, although I do have her paying her alma mater a visit in a future chapter ;)

almost end of year

any news on the next chapter. if a portion of chapter 8 is ready may you should just post it as part 8a
my suggestion for first day of the school. Annie would be taking to the school and blindfold and tie up in the basement of the school with the janitors help. every school period through out the day, someone would be using her. she would only know how many people had use her. all the cum collected will be use for her morning coffee for the week.

Yeah, I know it's been a while... :(

As those who visit my blog know (URL in profile), I've been out of work for a while and focused on that. Being home one may think I have all the time in the world to write, but it's just not the case lately. Have been working on all of my sequels--including Annie's--but nothing's quite near the point of release yet. I've learned from all the negative responses on Chapter 03 of Annie not to break up chapters any longer, so you'll all have to wait until it's completed :(

You've got a few good suggestions so far. You may also make Annie going to school all tied up under her clothes. But, before finding her place of hiding, she is discovered by boys and abused...
But I am worry for Annie. It's been a long while without any update.

Not forgotten...

As I've mentioned on my blog, the Annie story is not forgotten. I have bits and pieces of chapter 08 done, but Lapdancing has been receiving the most feedback, so have focused on that story. Writing is not a full time thing for me (not economically feasible, LOL), so I only write when I feel like it...and then having so many stories to have sequels to write, I have to choose what seems to be not only the most read by viewers, but what I'm in the mood to write as well.

Annie will be continuing, although I realize it's been YEARS since a sequel. I just don't know when I'll be getting around to it....

What's Happening?

Why so long getting out Chapter 8?