An Erotic Tale Ch. 01

Sweet

I just love Carson. Promising start to what sounds like a lovely story.

Cute.

I'm excited to see where you take this story. Mega potenital. Love it. Cheers :D

Good start to what should be a sexy hot series.

Hope top see more of Carson soon. Keep writing. and I will keep reading.

more please and fast!

This is hot stuff. I found myself starting to get hard then poof the story was over. Get back to writing and quickly please. I really wanted to get off on this story, because it is well written. I need to get off so get on with it.

Good stuff

Just don't make either you or him 12 + inches, ok?

Cool....

yep, me too, I like Carson. Great start...super cool!

Cheers! :)

Sexy strong story

I really like your story and look forward to more of this tale. One bit of cautionary advice for you. Be extremely careful slipping from first person to third person narrative. It's a tricky switch to make and often makes the reader lose the flow.

Otherwise, you have struck a nerve with a sexual fantasy many men share with you and I look forward to reading the next installments.

This was really nice :)