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Rapture, To A Muse's Ear

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by wildsweetone04/20/11

:)

i like the last three stanzas. could the poem stand on its own without the first stanza?

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by twelveoone04/20/11

Probably

not, if he is skywriting,
this is so strange I gave it a 5, I can't figure it out, for some reason I hear the star spangled banner sung badly, it intrigues...it does have that.

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