All Comments on 'I am not your friend'

by Desejo

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wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 13 years ago
:)

i like the lack of punctuation in this. would be tempted to take the last period out.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
Interesting

turn from the title; at the end. Nicely done. Consider "I wish it was otherwise" NW score5

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 13 years ago
This.....

.....is the best of your three so far. Understated with a nice finish. I'm hooked, looking for more.

Tess

DesejoDesejoalmost 13 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thanks for all the helpful comments, everyone.

tango0919tango0919almost 13 years ago

Another great one...maybe the last line...I am not your friend ?

TathagataTathagataabout 9 years ago

Intimate and at the same time universal.

that's a wonderful talent.

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