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by Anonymous

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by wildsweetone04/20/11

nice imagination :)

'a great ship tip its bows skywards'

i'm not sure 'tip' is the right word... how about 'tilt'?

i like the sounds in this poem.

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by twelveoone04/20/11

This

really demands attention, had to sink in to it. A5, band instruments, air.

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by GuiltyPleasure04/21/11

Lettuce......

......as Titanic. I like this micro-moment at the sink.

Tess+5

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by ishtat04/21/11

?

Bow singular perhaps? otherwise ditto previous comments.

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by butters04/24/11

unlike the titanic

this doesn't sink but sails on around the world and back again

i can even believe the ship-vision came to you as you show it here - in the kitchen, via a leaf of cos

worth more than a 5

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