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by Anonymous

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by IrishSmile04/22/11

i like it

you should continue this!

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by Anonymous04/22/11

Please continue this

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by foxy_lady7604/22/11

more

continue on

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by ZanysDell04/23/11

This story has potential

You bounce quickly from one step to the next to the next. It doesn't flow smoothly. You could add so much more to flesh this story out. It does have potential to be really good. Try reworking it. :)

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by Andy_Bangedherhard04/24/11

you know what i think about it Lady. ;) -Mike

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