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by Anonymous

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by bulltlr04/21/11

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I like the distinction between the items and the other stuff... makes the reader believe the item at one time held great importance

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by twelveoone04/22/11

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agree. only adding it does it so well, esp. the end.

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by butters04/24/11

it all works well enough together

but this part is worthy of its own space as a short poem.


Item: one beautiful pen
courtesy of Singapore Television
--dry and will write
no poems in the short term.

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