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Very nice
Each stanza is vivid as a photo embedded with your fine poetry.
4 for
four.. you are blowing Me away. what a pleasure.
or perhaps.. 4 on the floor?
That last line took me down ;)
Pointless
desert verses from deserted senses
how the fuck did we get to the Catskills
Oh alternative universe
but I do have some questions
because nothing works
in my laborious quest
for a reason
Got One?
I'd love to hear it.
I did not vote
Explain?
twelveone: Actually, you'd be surprised at how much you DID understand! Thanks for the input regardless.
I can get closer
the multiple meaning of the word "state", I can probably tell you what this was run through and running against. Since we seem to be playing a game of knowing and unknowing, I leave it as that. A little uncertain?
Suggestion, do it with "quark", post it in that cheesy thread. That would be amusing.
nothing works
when taken alone, one element against another - too many differences... but only in the coming together, that moment of non-thinking, does any of it make sense.
whatever your intentions as the author, i love this. its language, its imagery, its ... richness.
*****
Five.
That last verse
is a killer.
Nice work
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