i really enjoyed this story but i also feel that Josh gave in WAY to easily. I mean he was mad at him and all of a sudden ... he's like here's my address and they're gettin it on.
I think it would have been cool if Josh had made Alex work for it you know?
Cuz I know that I would not give in that easily after what Alex did. I would have forgiven him but I'd have made him work.
So all that being said. I like the story, enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to reading more from you.
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Anonymous04/27/11
Loved it! I don't think Josh gave in too easy. I just wish they had talked things out a little more and that the love making had been a little more wirtten out like it was in other chapters-- besides that I thought it was great. I really look forward to reading whatever you come up with next!
Lord have mercy hon! Its Sunday and i had all these chores to do and I got wrapped into your great writing. Thank you so much for taking me there! I guess the vacuuming and window washing can be done another day! I'm hungry as hell and dint even cook anything , i've been so wrapped in your stories!thank you so much for sharing your mind with us! These bear dramas of yours are too much! Most excellent! I am so hooked!
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Anonymous06/17/11
Oh papi. I loved it! Made me cry.... hmmm.... I think I am in love with Alex a little too.
I totally loved your story!! The characters were well written and the story was awesome!! Thanks for sharing!! Can't wait to read the rest of ur stuff :)
Love the ending....
It was very cute, sweet, and sooooooo romantic! LOL. I'm such a sucker for a happy ending.....awwwwww.....they're so sweet together...awwww....:)
Anyway, are there any more?
Enjoyed it immensely! Cheers! :)
That was SWEET!!
I am also a sucker for romance. Great job!!! Thanks!!!
Ok...but
I feel that Josh gave in WAY too easily after the roller coaster of emotions Alex made him endure. He should have made Alex prove his love.
I like...
Very sweet
great
i really enjoyed this story but i also feel that Josh gave in WAY to easily. I mean he was mad at him and all of a sudden ... he's like here's my address and they're gettin it on.
I think it would have been cool if Josh had made Alex work for it you know?
Cuz I know that I would not give in that easily after what Alex did. I would have forgiven him but I'd have made him work.
So all that being said. I like the story, enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to reading more from you.
Loved it! I don't think Josh gave in too easy. I just wish they had talked things out a little more and that the love making had been a little more wirtten out like it was in other chapters-- besides that I thought it was great. I really look forward to reading whatever you come up with next!
Oh and I loved it when Josh called Alex "papi".
Sweet
I liked it, and can't wait to see what is next.
Awsome
Your story is really great I cant wait to read more of your writing that is if you write anymore cause you seem like a great writer
Great story...thanks! :)
Oh my!
Lord have mercy hon! Its Sunday and i had all these chores to do and I got wrapped into your great writing. Thank you so much for taking me there! I guess the vacuuming and window washing can be done another day! I'm hungry as hell and dint even cook anything , i've been so wrapped in your stories!thank you so much for sharing your mind with us! These bear dramas of yours are too much! Most excellent! I am so hooked!
Oh papi. I loved it! Made me cry.... hmmm.... I think I am in love with Alex a little too.
I sooo loved it!
Thanks for a great story, great believable characters and a sweet resoltuion! Now that's a recipe for you!
OMG!!
I totally loved your story!! The characters were well written and the story was awesome!! Thanks for sharing!! Can't wait to read the rest of ur stuff :)
Very sweet
Lovely sweet story
Romantic................ just too sweeeetttt.
I do love a happily ever after ending ! I'm ecstatic for Josh and Alex ! Love them both and the story was, once again, amazing !
Wow!
I laugh, I cry and I fell in love with this story... Your one of the best writer! Thumbs up for you! 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
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