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Alex and I Ch. 04

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by alexandra3604/27/11

Love the ending....

It was very cute, sweet, and sooooooo romantic! LOL. I'm such a sucker for a happy ending.....awwwwww.....they're so sweet together...awwww....:)

Anyway, are there any more?

Enjoyed it immensely! Cheers! :)

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by Anonymous04/27/11

That was SWEET!!

I am also a sucker for romance. Great job!!! Thanks!!!

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by Anonymous04/27/11

Ok...but

I feel that Josh gave in WAY too easily after the roller coaster of emotions Alex made him endure. He should have made Alex prove his love.

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by LoveBird192904/27/11

I like...

Very sweet

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by uchena04/27/11

great

i really enjoyed this story but i also feel that Josh gave in WAY to easily. I mean he was mad at him and all of a sudden ... he's like here's my address and they're gettin it on.

I think it would have been cool if Josh had made Alex work for it you know?

Cuz I know that I would not give in that easily after what Alex did. I would have forgiven him but I'd have made him work.

So all that being said. I like the story, enjoyed reading it and am looking forward to reading more from you.

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by Anonymous04/27/11

Loved it! I don't think Josh gave in too easy. I just wish they had talked things out a little more and that the love making had been a little more wirtten out like it was in other chapters-- besides that I thought it was great. I really look forward to reading whatever you come up with next!

Oh and I loved it when Josh called Alex "papi".

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by nomoretears0004/27/11

Sweet

I liked it, and can't wait to see what is next.

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by LuvCammy04/30/11

Awsome

Your story is really great I cant wait to read more of your writing that is if you write anymore cause you seem like a great writer

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by TopBitchK05/29/11

Great story...thanks! :)

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by julri06/05/11

Oh my!

Lord have mercy hon! Its Sunday and i had all these chores to do and I got wrapped into your great writing. Thank you so much for taking me there! I guess the vacuuming and window washing can be done another day! I'm hungry as hell and dint even cook anything , i've been so wrapped in your stories!thank you so much for sharing your mind with us! These bear dramas of yours are too much! Most excellent! I am so hooked!

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by Anonymous06/17/11

Oh papi. I loved it! Made me cry.... hmmm.... I think I am in love with Alex a little too.

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by wingedchaos10/15/11

I sooo loved it!

Thanks for a great story, great believable characters and a sweet resoltuion! Now that's a recipe for you!

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by NaughtyButNice2502/24/12

OMG!!

I totally loved your story!! The characters were well written and the story was awesome!! Thanks for sharing!! Can't wait to read the rest of ur stuff :)

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by daireto11/05/13

Very sweet

Lovely sweet story

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by Mystic89601/05/15

Romantic................ just too sweeeetttt.

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by Haphaestion200404/10/15

I do love a happily ever after ending ! I'm ecstatic for Josh and Alex ! Love them both and the story was, once again, amazing !

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by Anonymous04/13/16

Wow!

I laugh, I cry and I fell in love with this story... Your one of the best writer! Thumbs up for you! 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

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