Dreams Ch. 05

Good

I'm enjoying your story! Just don't wait so long to post! Your good writer.

Great

Now I'm seeing your full potential as a writer come alive. Keep it up! 5 ***** Update soon.

well...

i'm actually rooting for Natalia to leave Jason personally. He doesn't seem to really want to take responsibility for his actions. It's more like he wants to sweep his actions under the rug as if they never happened. I'm not feeling him at all.

What a dickhead.

He has no redeeming qualities what so ever.

Please!

Let her heart speak to her...let it have her understand that if he loved her just as fiercely as she loved him then he wouldn't have to make the "It didn't mean anything" speech because he would be home with her. Give her the strength to get over him and the courage to move on. Allow him to suffer the loneliness the same way she did; physically and emotionally. I wish for a his long lost brother or cousin to come into the picture a do right everything he did wrong. *le sigh* Am I asking for too much?=)

Asshole

She should give him a swift kick to the family jewels , tell him no and move to another state, fall in love and never see him again.....but hey that's my take on this story.

Hmmm

I don't think she's making it hard enough for him. I want to like him, but I don't think he seems to care enough... eitherway, I'm still excited to see where you take this.

Douche

It certainly seems like she wants to get back with the douche bag she married. If it was one woman...maybe, but several women in the span of only four years...the man is a serial cheater. Please don't have mercy on Jason...let Natalie dump him. And the cute niece is no reason to feel sorry for him. I already miss James...where is he by the way???

PLEASE FINISH PLEASE

THIS IS SOOO GOOD JASON IS A SELFISH ASSHOLE...... I HOPE SHE GETS AWAY FROM HIM OR AT LEAST TEACH HIM WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE IN PAIN LIKE HER

omg please finish this. Why does Jason only have excuses? why ask her to help him be a better man, instead of showing her himself how he could do things him self?! damn, bastard. Fucking lazy bitch if you ask me. She better drop him for the baby sake. It's sad that some kids grow up with terrible environment. Kids take on their parents habit so please do not let her become his door mat again. Please update soon~

Please fiish this story

I wish you would finish this gem. The guy needs to be w/o her for a few years--not months. She can raise her child and become stronger. If they are suppose to be together then throw in a love interest for her to get that self-esteem/respect back first, especially after he has cheated more than once. This girl may have to make him win her back every day!

I wanna

punch Jason in his throat. Repeatedly. But other than that, please finish this story. It'd be great if he met some Dexter type who was attached/stalking one of his extramarital conquests and kills them both, but it's your world, Boss.

I think they need the time apart and both need therapy. They need to work on themselves and then together regardless of a divorce or not. The trust is gone so he need to give her time and think about her wants first and not his. If he has to let her go for him to stop hurting her then thats what he has to do for the woman he claims to love.

Natalia definitely need to tell him about the baby. She didn't like Jason keeping secrets so she shouldn't continue to hide it. She don't have to go running back to him because of the baby but Jason will try extra hard to get her back though. They can serve as parents without being together.

Unfinished

Author died or lost interest.

Unfinished fragment of a story. Not worth reading.