All Comments on 'Mirror Mirror Ch. 03'

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LaSalia over 11 years ago

Almost

The motivations of the dwarfs to keep Snow White displayed (as treasure/possession?) Could have been more fully realized. Again, I prefer more show than tell, but the ideas were good. Your sticking to the original story plotline was cool, but I question then if it's truly a horror story as we are all aware of what will happen next. To me, this is still a fantasy story, but I know categorizing work is often the hardest part!

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Better than Disney

Now that's the the way to tell it! Damn good story-and the sex wasn't bad either

Mizdrgn28 5 months ago

This version was lots of fun! Thank you!!!

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