by Candylips2011
Pianos don't blare, brass does.
I'd like to know what music he was playing.....
The story was starting to get hot, but it wasn't 'nonconsent'. It should have been under 'erotic couplings'. Nobody was forced to do something they wouldn't normally do. They bargained over her taking off the top and well I guess it got good, but definitely consensual. Still, it started getting interesting, but then your ending just stopped. Maybe you could do a part 2 and see where it goes.
You managed to pull the story line together and finish off quickly. Great read, would have been great to have a follow on story with some heated sex..