All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbor'

by Candylips2011

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wtf

Seriously, what the hell was that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
music to anyone's ears?

Pianos don't blare, brass does.

I'd like to know what music he was playing.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very nice

I liked it a lot :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Not Quite Expected

The story was starting to get hot, but it wasn't 'nonconsent'. It should have been under 'erotic couplings'. Nobody was forced to do something they wouldn't normally do. They bargained over her taking off the top and well I guess it got good, but definitely consensual. Still, it started getting interesting, but then your ending just stopped. Maybe you could do a part 2 and see where it goes.

cantbuymycantbuymyabout 12 years ago
write another

you will get even better than you already are. thank you.

bumknee52bumknee52almost 8 years ago
Too quick and easy

Sorry, not enough build up. Seemed irrational.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Short and sweet

You managed to pull the story line together and finish off quickly. Great read, would have been great to have a follow on story with some heated sex..

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