All Comments on 'False Time'

by Wolf_girl13

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donaldedonaldealmost 13 years ago
very good

all so true time does heal all wounds it just dampens the sharpness of the pain excellent poem

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Breathtaking

I felt each and every word. Well done, Wolf_girl13.

Warmest,

*~Candlelight062~*

JazCullenJazCullenover 12 years ago
Felt that deeply

I don't normally venture into the realms of poetry as I feel unqualified to comment on it. But I saw your name against this one and I had to open and read.

I'm sure others will comment on style/prose/rhythm and whatever other teminology goes into writing a quality poem. I will merely comment on the context of the words and what I took from it.

The words ring so true and I'm sure we've all felt this way at one time in our lives, if not many.

Reading this makes me want to give you a huge hug so consider one sent your way.

Jxx

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
WHILE ALL IS HAPPENING

time still travels and leaves the wind in the wake. TK U MLJ LV NV

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