homeNon-Erotic PoetryPrimatePublic Comments

All Comments  for

Primate

byoneiria©
All
Comments (1)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by twelveoone04/25/11

Interesting

experiment, two lines that don't converge. These lines are know by me, how many others care? In short, you lost most of the potential readers by line two. Not developed enough, and not completely thought out.
Despite all that I left a five, I did have to stop and think.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Primate  or
More submissions by oneiria.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel