so far so good, next chapter please. I can't wait to see the next development.
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Anonymous04/27/11
Woman!!
Your story was a bright light in he middle of my insomnia. I was practically squealing when I saw it. Then you trampled my heart by ending it so quickly ;-). Definitely enjoying the twist, but please do not torture us for too long!
at about 4 different points in the story, wondering if they were going to find out who the other really is. The suspense is killing me. But it's got to come out eventually. He'll see that she's still in town, she'll come to a game or a game event.
I'm excited for the next chapter.
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Anonymous04/27/11
5 stars
I cried cried & cried...thank's to u & socallcynic...it's awesome
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Anonymous04/27/11
Thisbis such a good story with them being so close but not really seeing who the other is yet. Please dont wait another week for the next chapter.
Dkhanson01
Dunno the first thing about hockey, it's practically unknown in this part of the world. But then again, as long as you're writing it, I'll be reading it. The excitement you show in your characters make your stories a delightful read. Thank you author for your efforts.
Well written. A grabber. Keep the chapters coming.
Please?
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Anonymous04/27/11
Moving Day
Didn't Casey in a previous chapter mention Rory helping them move furniture in! I LOVE this story. Excellent writing but it needs to continue. Hopefully we don't have a horribly long wait for chapter 4.
(Sorry about that part.) Nonetheless, this is being a great story. With that chapter ending, though, your readers really need to see Ch.04 as quickly as you can throw it together.
I wasn't a hockey fan until I started reading MugsyB and PennLady's stories, and now I have another writer to feed the frenzy!! Thanks for that! ;-)
And I agree with the others - another installment ASAP.
xoxo-Lily
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Anonymous04/28/11
Such a tease. This series is wonderful. More soon, please.
Woman seem to have this thing about teasing - and you are teasing us, you can admit it. Still all and all I love the way your story is developing, its romantic and sexy yet not all wet and sticky. Keep it up I love the tease too! - Kevin
You've got to love a good hockey romance!
So far this one's all systems go. I'm looking forward to the next period.
GE
Very Interesting!
so far so good, next chapter please. I can't wait to see the next development.
Woman!!
Your story was a bright light in he middle of my insomnia. I was practically squealing when I saw it. Then you trampled my heart by ending it so quickly ;-). Definitely enjoying the twist, but please do not torture us for too long!
I held my breath
at about 4 different points in the story, wondering if they were going to find out who the other really is. The suspense is killing me. But it's got to come out eventually. He'll see that she's still in town, she'll come to a game or a game event.
I'm excited for the next chapter.
5 stars
I cried cried & cried...thank's to u & socallcynic...it's awesome
Thisbis such a good story with them being so close but not really seeing who the other is yet. Please dont wait another week for the next chapter.
Dkhanson01
Nice!
Dunno the first thing about hockey, it's practically unknown in this part of the world. But then again, as long as you're writing it, I'll be reading it. The excitement you show in your characters make your stories a delightful read. Thank you author for your efforts.
Morning Delight
Well written. A grabber. Keep the chapters coming.
Please?
Moving Day
Didn't Casey in a previous chapter mention Rory helping them move furniture in! I LOVE this story. Excellent writing but it needs to continue. Hopefully we don't have a horribly long wait for chapter 4.
loving it so far
fucking love this....need more pleaseeeee!
Hurry up with the next installments! please.
Confession by a Not-a-Hocky Fan
(Sorry about that part.) Nonetheless, this is being a great story. With that chapter ending, though, your readers really need to see Ch.04 as quickly as you can throw it together.
Another great chapter!
I can't wait for chapter 4, hope you'll be able to post it soon after the way this 1 ended!
More please!!!
I wasn't a hockey fan until I started reading MugsyB and PennLady's stories, and now I have another writer to feed the frenzy!! Thanks for that! ;-)
And I agree with the others - another installment ASAP.
xoxo-Lily
Such a tease. This series is wonderful. More soon, please.
thankyouthankyouu
Jesus christ, you're killing me here! I am so fucking in love with this series, I can't even put it into words!
You sure do have a way with words; keep it coming!!
Wonderful Writing
You have a wonderful way with your story telling. Please, don't leave us on the hook for long. Next chapter, please!
Hmmmmm
Woman seem to have this thing about teasing - and you are teasing us, you can admit it. Still all and all I love the way your story is developing, its romantic and sexy yet not all wet and sticky. Keep it up I love the tease too! - Kevin
You Bum!!!
Don't you dare leave it here. This is really getting good. I like the story...keep it going.
Hurry Up!
Stop having a life and get to writing!
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