For The Girl

Inspiration from another story but...

I won't say you stole the story (in the other story, the girl wanted to buy a car and used her bf to get it): you got a lot inspired by it, but you should have added more personal things. It's quite too similar and the rare ideas you develop don't go very far. For exemple, the girl takes a video: it could lead to some great humiliation, but there's not much that way.
So, maybe if you wrote another part, personal, it could be more interesting.

Worst story

Why would they do this for a gym membership? WTF? I don't get it at all!

i liked it

it made me shoot a huge load. one prob..a big dick like that never goes into a virgin whole as easily as u make it seem. trust me... i know from experience

Great

It was great. I would love to see a sequel. Maybe the girl and guy get back together, thinking that the incident was just a fluke, but one night Brock returns and fucks Benny right in front of Stacy, making him his bitch.

This is essentially the exact same plot of "Straight Turnout" by regroch on Literotica. The only real difference is the wording and the gym membership vs. buying a car plot.

Hot But a RipOff

The scene was hot, but as another commentor said the plot is pretty much stolen from Straight Turnout, a much better written story that came out a few years back.

literotica's policies

shows how much the admins here care about ethics. they required me to withdraw my own blog link from my stories, but they are perfectly okay with outright plagiarism.

hot story, was with Straight Turnout too.

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oooh an homage...

bravo! :D

wish someone would make a vid of this, pretty hot story

Amazing story... I would love for this to happen to me...

loved it

i would definitely watch the porn movie of this!

(I agree with the others that it is like another story in literotica where the GF makes the BF suck the car saleman's cock for a discount and gets fucked too!)

I just shot a load almost at the very end of the story. I am straight, but if this were to happen to me, I wouldn't be any longer. I am still jacking my dick off. I am probably going to come again. I will never forget this story.

Not okay!

Not okay!

terribly selfish girlfriend

seriously she deserved to loose her boyfriend in that manner if a gym membership was more important than their relationship.

too similiar

this story is like another story on here its too similiar

wow

I would definitely do that for a membership. And anything else that man wanted me to do

In the closet.....

Great story, very hot! Benny comes out the closet (limping)...hehehe. I guess that str8 boy was really a CLOSETED gay man huh? lol. Benny was knocked out by his huge cock hitting him in the head? I guess it REALLY was a baseball bat sized cock to do that hahaha!

Hot

Absolutely AMAZING loved it!! Got me rock hard Leaking here at work!!!
mmmmm mmmmm HOT

FUCK

Damn i need to join a gym and could only dream that i would be benny, I would let Brock take me in a heartbeat and I am (as of right now) straight as they cum

Utterly pointless

So basically they're left with a supposedly-free gym membership which they can't actually use (at least not together) because, every time they come back, Brock is going to try to split them to take Benny for himself.

There was therefore no point in their having gone through with this... to put it mildly.

The bit about using a "closet" was amusing, though. Deliberate?

more about the video

“This is crazy; I need to get this on video or something.” Amanda turned on the video function of her phone and held it up to the window. a chapter or two on what happens when video is shown would be nice,

good one

my first time i was put in women clothes it was by a older man we had a fight i told him to kiss my ass hole then he call me a bitch i to him right i am a bitch but you are not man that can make me a bitch just then he told me i show you who the man around here i said right that when i told him the day i wear women clothes i will suck your cock he told me you are on this his going to be fun i went back to what i was doing just then he turn the water hose on me now i was all wet i had to find some other clothes to wear i wen in the house and found found some i remove my clothes and toke a shower when i came out i found some girly clothes on my bed he walk in behind me well now bitch you have two ways going about this you can put them on or i will but you will be in them i look at him and thought about it i pick up the bra and put it on and ask him if he want to hook it up he said yes as he hook it up his hand then went around a he felt my breasts as a man you have nice tits i back up a bit and felt his hard cock my ass was bare now i bend over to get the black panties when i heard his zipper open up then his hand was at my ass hole he felt my ass a bit then i felt two finger go in my ass hole it hurt a bit but i like it i bend over a bit more i see my bitch like this well you are going to love this just then he shove his cock in my ass hole soon i could feel his balls on my ass now bitch he said who now the man i told him you are sir that right bitch and what are you i am your girly boy bitch and i wear women clothes now that right girly your pussy ass hole belong to me now and your tits too well after a few month my tits grew out more and i now a house maid

Nice story - brings back some memories

When I was in college, a girlfriend I was crazy about coerced me into a three way with a TA from one of her classes. He was 10 years older than me and much bigger, and their real plan was to have him use me while she watched. After a lot of weed and alcohol, their plan succeeded and he wound up using me as a fuck toy. Several months later, we broke up, but her TA fuck buddy still used to come over every so often to reintroduce my now-willing boypussy to his oversized dick.

Back to back

I had to jack off..reading this...wish I could get fucked like this..some day...
Some people have all of the luck...Lol.

O YEAH

IF THAT WAS ME, AND MY GIRLFRIEND DID THAT, AND I SUCKED AND GOT FUCKED BY HIS BIG COCK,AND HE MADE ME HAVE MULTIPLE ORGASMS, I WOULD TURN INTO A FAGGIT LOVING BITCH, NOWAY I WOULD EVER WANT TO BE WITH A GIRL AGAIN, I WOULD SUCK COCK ALL THE TIME, AND BE SOMEONE BITCH, I WOULD THANK HER FOR MAKING ME DO IT, AND TURNING ME INTO A TRUE LOVING FAGGIT, THAT'S WHAT HAPPENED TO ME ,WHEN I WAS IN THE MARINES, TWO GUYS MADE ME SUCK THEIR COCKS, THEN THEY BOTH FUCKED ME REALLY GOOD,AT FIRST I DIDN'T WANT TO,BUT WHEN I STARTED SUCKING HIS COCK,IT FELT AWESOME,WHEN HE FUCKED ME IT HURT,BUT THEN IT FELT AWESOME, I WAS THEIR BITCH FOR THREE YEARS, I WAS ENGAGED TO GET MARRIED,BUT I CALLED THE WEDDING OFF, AND TOLD MY GIRLFRIEND THAT I WANTED TO BE WITH A MAN FROM NOW ON, I LOVE MEN AND NEVER WANTED TO BE WITH A GIRL AGAIN,, I FELL IN LOVE WITH COCK,,,

Idk

I think I'd be more into it if he lost the bitch and gained a man to take care of him. He obviously doesn't have any friends. Look at how his girlfriend treated him, plus the answer to finding out the horrible thing she'd done to him was for that other stupid bitch to take a video to share.
His life is over. We all know it.