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by twelveoone04/26/11

4th down

(death card)
I'm the kinda man
who drinks beer and belches
only get's phony
when I write poetry

So fuck it.
I'll stay.

See how inspirational poetry works...
I liked this, a pissin good 5!!!!

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by Neonurotic04/26/11

A neon thread in tradition.

I like your poetry, the imagery you put in each stanza is intriguing and your voice is strong throughout; this poem is right on with that.

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by WillOtheWisp08/12/13

Excellent imagery!

Neon thread. Merlot banter. This is quite subtle. I enjoyed this.

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