Lacks much, including an explanation of why the slave has to be so trained, and any background to the D/s relationship. The story tags are also lacking - e.g. No mention of the branding
I found the story to be a powerful setup that I was hopping would be continued. The "starting in the middle" didn't bother me, it just added to the power. However, the last paragraph was a total surprise! It would certainly change any followup story and the non-consensual (and racist) ending bothers me.
English
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Lacks much, including an explanation of why the slave has to be so trained, and any background to the D/s relationship. The story tags are also lacking - e.g. No mention of the branding
Powerful Start(?)
I found the story to be a powerful setup that I was hopping would be continued. The "starting in the middle" didn't bother me, it just added to the power. However, the last paragraph was a total surprise! It would certainly change any followup story and the non-consensual (and racist) ending bothers me.
....umm...
I enjoyed it up until the last paragraph. I didn't agree with that, but I do look forward to more.
lovely
I enjoyeed the twist at the end continue with it please.
Nice beginning
Good start of a story or a series of stories. But don't leave it unfinished
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