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The plot thickens!
Another excellent chapter. Don't be long getting #09 out, please. This is very good writing.
A Very Enjoyable Story
Congratulations on a good interesting story, anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
I read the preamble to this...
...and decided I wanted to get the 'real feel' of the story.
Therefore I spent a few hours reading all the chapters.
It's an intriguing little tale, full of appropriate emotion and a classic 'romance' story. It warms my heart to think of the trials and tribulations through which this couple have gone, only to find each other again and realize the depth of their feelings for each other.
Thank you - I eagerly anticipate future chapters.
vary good
this story is one of the best i have read so far i hope you post the next one soon
are you going to finish it
i hope you finish the next part of the story
She Bought?
“He needed to buy her stuff, just like the way she'd bought him all that stuff.”
She bought him all that stuff? I thought she was pretty much broke, I assumed he paid for it all.
More Poor Communication!
If her family is struggling to the point that her parents have skimped on their own medical care while her father works himself to exhaustion, how is Maureen able to mix with the country club set?
“He had to make the discovery by himself. Yet she thought, 'her mom had told her. Why couldn't she help him, let him off the hook?'”
Exactly! Why not, especially when it’s obviously troubling him?
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