This is a good scenario - the busty mature woman who has just been dumped - but to go from her tears straight to him unbuttoning her shirt and bra is SO unrealistic that it totally destroys any credibility.
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This is a good scenario - the busty mature woman who has just been dumped - but to go from her tears straight to him unbuttoning her shirt and bra is SO unrealistic that it totally destroys any credibility.
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