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by twelveoone04/26/11

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attempt at comment. I is better than most haiku, anyway. But is it is not why say so? Don't bother trying to foil the "Oh, this must be crowd". I wrote a 7-5-7, once, it got hammered, problem was - it was closer, then any of the shit floating down the river. I fived it, they are all pretty good, not sure why the grouping.

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