All Comments on 'Kylee's Story Ch. 04'

holly fuck... :)))

I liked the beginning but you lost me at the whole fucking the son and then the father. King or not and then Aden kills his father?? But that's just how I feel about it :(

What's not to understand about her sleeping with the father as well as the son?

Kylee entered the household as a servant sold by her jackass of a father. Considering this is not a time of constitutional monarchs, what a king, queen, and crown prince says is law,haggling is rarely allowed. Including th fact she was a servant turned free person-in residance at the king's palace with no currency aside from her dowry, plus add that she's of mixed race it seems there is very little wiggle room, no pun intended.

So when the prince says strip and assume the position and then king five minutes later says the same thing it's best for Kylee's continued health and well- being to do it. Hell, she was thrown in the dungeon for saying no to the prince, imagine saying no to king!

It is fucked up that the king and the prince have shared Kylee- but as was pointed out, these things were not uncommon. I hope everyone enjoys the story, and I am currently working on chapter five. These last chapters will be rather curvy, so get ready for a circus.

Not see the Other Boleyn Girl?

Honestly, this whack stuff was not uncommon in these days, but I love it all the same. I swear this is my favorite story. Keep it up and I look forward to plenty more updates!

Five.

That was crazy YO! LOL

Lmao that was crazy.. and so very unexpected.. keep it up

i luv it especially the last sentence " but he loved kylee more" i can't wait 4 the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is kind if insane! Though romantic and such, I can't help think Aden is losing his mind somewhat. Either way, looking forward to more

i think its a really good story hope you finish soon keep up th good job

Please update soon.

i loved it!!! your stories are great cant wait to read more!!

Damn it not good to be the king.. at least with Aden for a son.

I would hate to be the one to make Aden angry or mad, to kill his father over the love of his life=WOW!!!

His father was wrong for making her sleep with him, knowing how his sin felt about her and she about Aden, rules about not being able to marry her for she was not royalty in his eyes-but came she not from the bowels of a Duke and are they not royalty???

She must have that fire na na...