by gayatrisaha00
I know it is your first language, for many of your readers, it isn't. It put me right off reading after the third paragraph, so I stopped there. Please write in one language only, otherwise you will put other's reading your stories too.
i am a chinese, i ve been to bangladesh,but i do not understand the Indian language,hindi?
it is very plain,but it sounds true,really true?
please use English only.
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I am looking forward to your email.
Even though this is under the nonconsent/reluctance tag it is almost completely unrealistic! Rape is something that 99 out of 100 people who are victims of it NEVER ENJOY!
As an Indian who likes English literature and erotica I find this stuff appalling. Please waste your time without imposing on others.
if you really know english as you say, then you should had thought about changing conversations in language everybody is common with. The terms you wrote like pati, beta, devar etc can be expressed as husband, son, brother in law etc. You should read more about in which category you want your story to be posted like example this story should be posted in loving wives category rather than reluctance/non-consent.
you said he said i said eh???WTF!? i aint come here for comedy !
Indian are not that well behaved as they are shown here.If someone is being raped and that to by a indian taxi driver,well it might be one of the most horrific moments of his/her life.
I really liked it, sounds very genuine and true...although could have been written even better...