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kitty Waited Ch. 01

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by KittyKatVenom08/08/11

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I like where this story is going but I am getting a little confused. Mainly because you change the point of view, from being in a different third person. If you stick to Master/Kitty it might make the story a little better, because using You, doesn't give this story justice. Even if it is in Master/Kitty, people are going to imagine themselves in the story. And I am also confused about the W/we stuff. It's very odd and slightly annoying. It is a good story. I just see that it has so much potential.

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by Anonymous02/12/15

could use some editing work.....

But still a nice pet story.

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