by adambishop
That was awful. Needs proofreading for grammar and basic internal coherence.
The overall story was pretty good
I dont get it. What the hell happened?
BUT WHO WAS PHONE?!?!?!
ok I understand that it was a ghost based on the title and the "strang indents on her thigh" but could you have continued it more????
comment regarding other comments on this story,picky,picky
Oooh, interesting! I liked the twist at the end.
Hmmmmm brilliant twist