All Comments on 'Katie and Emma Ch. 01'

thanks for sharing it Emma......you got me all hot and bothered :)

Gorgeous story - thanks for sharing it

Great sex and great stroke. Characterization non-existent, plot nowhere, but good hot sex carries all before it. Quibbles follow via "Send Feedback". I only quibble stories with merit. You wrote a good one here, and I'm sure you can do even better.

Emma You Have Started A Very Sexciting Story.

I Hope That Chapter 2 Is "Cum"ing Quickly

Kisses

All right! Keep writing.

... story by a beautiful woman ! Amazing how many 'straight' women find themselves in such a situation. Fantastic story. I hope it was true.

I've given you four stars, Emma. It could have been five but the whole story was a little abrupt. My reading of this story tells me that you can write, so take the time to write properly. "Katie & Emma" would have benefited enormously if you had taken the time to build the story up, to work harder on the characterisation and introduce a bit of drama. Many of the one-page, instant sex stories on this site are not very well written. Yours is well written; I think you've got the budding talent to do better.

Very much enjoyed the opening too this series. Would very much like to experience the next installment... PLEASE😍😍😍

5 🌟's