Yvette's Summer Adventure

5 Stars

Nice

Thanks for the nice compliment Mr. Boston, glad you enjoyed the story.

You do know the meaning of the word "CUCKOLD" as used in many cuckold wimp stories? Well you have written a classic example of a cuckold stories well done. You cuckold and swingign fans will love this story.

Thanks Anonymous for you comment. Your are right this story is a broad sense is a cuckold story. It is a cuckold story not because it deals with female domination and humiliation of the male character, instead it is cuckold story because it deals with a shared sexual experience outside of the primary relationship. Finally I agree with you not everyone is a fan of cuckold, group sex, or swinging stories which I entirely accept. However my hope is those who enjoy such stories will get enjoyment from this one.

I would like to say

That he is queer abd it won't be long before he has Jim's cock in his ass or mouth. The wife is really fat and old. That's the only woman he can get

No surprises

This was pretty much your standard run-of-the-mill cuck husband/wife sharing story, which would have been much more enjoyable were it well written.

I'd suggest the next time that you employ an editor so that it reads smoothly and every sentence makes sense (not all do) to the reader.

Also, you switch between tenses frequently, which is distracting and easy to fix, if you are willing to take the time to re-read your work before submitting it

Harry

Dreadful

Illiterate

...YVETTE IS HORNY AND WANT MUCH MORE RIGHT NOW !!!

...Good writing developing Yvette's sex drive, so now write some stories about Yvette's summer job as the beach bar's erotic masseuse at Hilton's African nudist swingers resort near Miami..Yvette is popular and averages 20 half hour "sessions" per day and she is live on the internet 24/7..Yvette loves the huge horse-size hung basketball players..what fun..Looking forward to Yvette's "massage" stories..Thanks ,,,,,::::::,,,,,:::::,,,,,,

Loving Story

This was a very loving story and I was glad to read it. Reminds me of the first time my wife went with a man who became her lover and often had nice sexual times with him in our own home. I'm happy to say she learned more about loving those few months than she did during our entire marriage. Good writing

Reply to Anonymous - Loving Story Comment

Thank you for the nice comment and I am glad you enjoyed the story.

Sorry I missed the part about a 'Loving wife' in this story. A cheating selfish cuckolding bitch yes an LW? no not even close.

Response to Anaymous comment on 20th July 2011

While I appreciate your comment and I feel you are entitled to it, I feel you miss the point of the story. I realize cuckolding and wife sharing can invoke strong feelings in people, which is a reason why I like to write this type of story. Loving wife to me is about a wife that does something for herself and at the same time brings joy to her partner. This implies her decision is free of an malice and free of any anger. Where I feel this type of story differs from a cheating wife or a wife bent on revenge is in the chain of events. My feeling, this story is about a couple who embarks on a journey of exploration and enjoys an experience together. There is no jealousy, no selfishness, and there is no example of Yvette putting her feelings before her husband. In addition, I feel this story shows a couple that can work through their feelings for the sake of making Yvette happy, which makes the relationship satisfying for them. Therefore, I feel this story is an excellent example of a loving wife.

Cuckolding is a FETISH

Peek, peak, pique

Peek - covert look
Peak - summit, top of hill or mountain
Pique - stimulate

Cuckold

Another stupid cuck with his brains in his cock end. Now she has had the green light she will sample more cocks.
Message is be careful what one wishes for.