Really Hot Strip Poker

good read

It was a good read but there should be more to the story. There was a few spelling mistakes but i enjoyed it.

Stupid waste of space

Good Read.

Pretty good for a quickie, would have been nice to involve Mom. The few spelling flaws weren't too confusing. I prefer stories with more detail and character development, but sometimes don't have the time for a longer story anyway. Over all quite enjoyable. Thanks for a good read.

Max52

good ideas

You have a lot of real feelings that come out in the stories. Try to be more realistic. Good things may happen for you if you are creative and sincere

Wh such big kahunas?

I like women who are natural. Using a discription that makes them look like a stripper crawling out on the stage and attemping to stand up is NOT my defintion of sex. You need to realize that most men are not into big breasted freaks. A nice set of smaller perky boobs with hard nipples is much more sexy than a freak who looks like Morgana

Poorly written - 2 rating

As soon as I saw this in the first paragraph "fairly pail skin" instead of "fair pale skin" I realized the author wasn't very sharp on spelling & grammar. Just too many errors like this to be a good read.

Hot sister

They should just entertain themselves all of the time. A good relationship is there for them and they should take advantage of it.

Maybe they could get mom interested in joining in with them next time.

Slick

Slick

Slick

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I lol'd...

This story is distracting. You jump from present tense to past tense often, sometimes within the same paragraph, and have grammatical errors. Also, the first couple of paragraphs were poorly written offering the "stats" of all three of you in a single sentence, etc.

For a newbie to writing it was a good story, simple but very hot, well done

I enjoyed it

This was a very impressive story. I like the details and the length was ok. In my opinion tho, I think the actual sex scene could have been a bit more descriptive and longer. But over all, the foreplay, the staring, the feeling, it was all wonderful. :)

Good.

Good story, but to short. 4/5

Blow Job Needed

Great story
but, gettinga nice blow job would fit in somewhere.
the better they suck, the better i fuck.
anonymous

red hot poker

loved it reminds me of my younger days playing poker with girl friend i never lost good story loved it

Good story but...

What sort of fantasy world do you live in where average dick length is seven inches?