All Comments on 'The Dream'

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connielingusconnielingusalmost 13 years ago
Good job

Does Barbara have a sister?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Slight criticism...

After Barbara recovered, her mouth descended on Bill's cock. As she gave him pleasure she whispered, "I never would have thought I'd let you rim me but it was it was great." >Tom< was surprised that she knew the term "rim" but decided it had just become a recurring part of their sex life. Barbara slowly and lovingly brought Bill to a huge cum.

WHO IS TOM?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
bill? tom? multiple personalities?

WTF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good story

Like was said, maybe barb has a sister?

sandycats4sandycats4almost 13 years ago
mmmm

My training starts in two days! I can't wait and Thank you for giving my Master the idea!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just awful

This was not hot nor well written. Tone was bad, scenes left much to be desired, and there was no consistency in the time line. I know it's supposed to be a dirty story but the thing about erotica is that it is still the written word. This was crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Damn

Wish my wife would agree to anal

sinsational83sinsational83about 9 years ago
not bad not too bad at all

This was pretty good. I liked it well enough to wonder if you couldn't add another chapter to it, maybe a 3 page chapter and with her like letting some one else use her pussy and ban her husband from being able to screw her pussy something like thst maybe. But for4 me this was a pretty good story good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Who

is Tom?????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wife obsessed with dick in ass

My life with my wife is about as close to this as you can cum......we spent 3 weeks trailer in her ass for this and I can honestly say that as I walk in door she is bent over our weight bench every evening with a 7 in plug at 2 in girth I remove and have her ass twice a day 7 days a week......I have not had her vagina in over a year ......have since tatooed her ass cheeks as Larry's anal whore.......😛

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