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Where's Bob

Can we get our old Bob back, he doesn't put up with cheating sluts?

Glad this was a short one, he's a wimp and a cuck - we do know that.

Anyway, thanks for the read!

Not what I expected

I like the Bob stories where he would have tasered this prick . But It is a good story.

We've lost JPB

Another writer turns urchin! The king is officially dead! JPB is now a WACC Job! Wuss Ass Castrated Cuckold. To bad another dies at the side of the road. If you guys want real men stories check out some of the new writers in this section. They really rock and they are a perfect replacement for once was our favorite stand up witers

I kept waiting for him to "lower te boom" on her...

...but he never did! What a wimp!

This story was one of the worst that JPB has ever bothered to submit to Lit!

A Well put together Story

But, if there had been a warning flag I would not have read it. About 25% of JPB's stories are like this....

I just vomited

as did most readers

What were you thinking?

I know my reaction was...what's the point? Why bother squandering your excellent skills? Fiction is fiction but often an author has a point that he wants the reader to inculcate (so there!). Tell us JPB. What were you driving for? I certainly did not get it.

I've decided that JPB really hates his audience. Having written hundreds of stories, he knows full well which stories get the best scores and comments.

He just hates us. Reading many of his stories is like watching a talented actress or singer destroy themselves with drugs. You just stare in disbelief and despair at the waste of time and talent.

Not my cup of tea

Please put a cuckold caveat at the beginning of your story if you are going to pander this crowd.

This was a well written story but a waste of my time. Sorry.

Concur

only one quibble.into the kitchen were Maxi was busy|No, into the kitchen where Maxi was busy

But reading this is like watching a really fine dramatic actor do a tv commercial for toilet bowl cleaner. Talent and technique in spades, but what is the result? Sure it sells, but is that why you have talent and technique?

Not worth reading

Where is the old JPB gone? All his recent stories were crap to me!

Not much of a story...

Little to do about nothing... and I like many of your stories, but not this one...

OK, What now? Is it over or is there more?

JPB,

Chapter 2 or ? Is their marriage over, as they once had or is it changed to be what their discussion described, as it ended??

Waiting........


x

One star this time.

Bob, you are a good writer but I think the idea for a cuck dislaimer at the beginning of the 30% of the stories that you write that are cuck stories is a good one. It would be fair to your audience and it would probably save you a bunch of nasty comments. You basically did that a few stories back when you started a story off talking about a fantasy that the husband had to see his wife with someone else. I quit reading at that point and figured that the next story would be a nice "husband salvaging his manhood/making his wife accountable" story.

Anyway, just wanted to say that I thought that the other commenter had a good idea!

Requests for a cuck warning are a waste of breath

JPB likes fucking with his readers heads. His stories are all over the map from extreme wimpy cucks to wrath of God revenge. You never know what you are going to get and he deliberately writes his stories so you often don't find out until you are most of the way through. In this one the hubby finds out early that his wife is going to step out on him but we don't really find out how he feels about it until his wife gets home and he says he wants to eat another guys cum out of her. Meanwhile JPB has had us on the hook for the whole story. It's deliberate and we aren't going to get a warning that lets us off the hook. He's having too much fun playing with us.

On the other hand, I don't usually bother reading or rating obvious cuck stories since they are not my cup of tea. I don't feel it's fair to dis a story just because it's not to my taste. However, since JPB gives no heads up on his stories I feel perfectly justified in ranking his stories poorly if I am suckered into reading them. Fair's fair.

Silly story with a very cliched ending

Nary a twist or a twisty. Thank you for keeping this short! Whew!
Should have worn a "maxi pad"...or did she?

Sorry man but one star from me. The ending was not at all good. What's the point of the whole story if you leave it to the reader to basically figure out the rest of your tale from a point from where most of the other stories in this genres start.
The man is so befuddled and confused. At one point he is stunned and says he will have to stop his wife from going out with Sandy but then he doesn't do anything other than asking her whether she wants to go for a movie or not (So much for trying to STOP his wife from going eh??). Then he gets angry and then sad and then turned on and then suspicious and then.... STOP !! You're confusing the reader as well. The male (was he even a male??) character just sat down and stared at the ceiling and waited for wifey to come home and tell him whether she fucked another guy or not. Someone please give him a kick in the ass!!

I am sorry to say but this story was written with no sharp plot. Some of your stories are nice. This certainly wasn't one of them.

Good until

Good until the gay shit at the end ... There's enough writers out there who seem to like to be wussy eaters of others cream without our beloved Bob slipping one in just to jerk us around. Write an alternate ending, hubby has to take a bit of a hit from her because of his own affair , but don't turn him into a mutant male Bi-freak.

Confused about his thoughts

Why would he want his wife to cheat on him?

Is it the thought that if she had sex with a big cock and came back to him she would love him?

It may be just that she is comfortable with her lifestyle, and not ready to dump him yet. Once she finds a big cock that can satisfy her lifestyle economically, she will drop him like a dog turd.

Ok back to wimp bob. Just when I thought that the wimp was gone here he is again.
Sorry, but I hated this story.

Where is Bob?

Has anyone seen the real JPB?

Great Story

Love all your stories Bob

This is the real JPB....

....DUH!- an amusing tail of wimpdom, guaranteed to piss someone off. Real easy not to read this writer.

never finished the story.. no real point.

never fished the story, as i'm not into wimps and their sluts.

i'm not American, i just don't get the cockled crap. to me it's just odd pointless crap.

the swinger can write this drivel better.

but your one of the best, burn the bitch writers out there...

your just wasting your skills, on the swinger and voyager crap..

oh well.

That was just

pathetic.

WHY DID I OPEN THE DOOR

sometimes dumb is better, TK U MLJ LV NV

What the.....

Let me try to figure this out. A guy accidentally overhears his wife and her slut friend discussing the wife's lie about virginity, and two cheating episodes. They go on to plan an evening of infidelity with a couple of big cocks. The husbands reaction is to invent a bunch of idiotic reasons not to confront the wife about any of it or stop the evenings slutscapades. He lets her leave, follows her, decides he is helpless, goes home to wring his hands and wait. He then decides that the thought of her being fucked by a big cock excites him. That is when I realized I had wasted my time..................

JPB´s done it again..

unbelievable stupid behaviour here; I doubt reality could in any way catch up with it. Sorry, JPB. I know you can do better...

I need to

quit reading the shit you write. On the rest I'll just go to the end and give it a 1.

I was reading along and enjoying the story, until . . .

"I broke into a cold sweat as the meaning of the dream and my erection hit me - I was turned on by the thoughts of Maxi and her large dicked male friend."

Every cuck story has a line like that, and it never fails to kill the story for me.

And what's worse, you didn't end it for us.

3/4 was good and interesting...

...but then Bob decided to show the world once again how he loved being a cuck. It proves once more that Lit. becomes home of cuckolds more and more. When is Lit. going to give them a topic of their own, i.e. Wimps, Cucks and other girls??

Right up until the end

it was a good story. And then the wimp came out of the closet and ruined it. One more time JPB proves he can write a good story and then find a way to blow it all to hell with either a dumb ending or no ending. BAH!

Sometimes you need more space.

JPB wrote a story called "The competition". In that story the poor husband was forced to work at a job a long ways from home. He just couldn't get back home without threatening his job. So his whore wife decides she's going to hold a little "competition" between some guys to see who will get to fuck her if her husband isn't home by a time she sets. After giving the competitors blow jobs, she decides on one guy and at 12:01 she starts fucking him. Of course the poor husband has been delayed and races through the door just in time to hear his wife getting fucked. Since JPB didn't allow comments on that story I thought I'd take this opportunity to say that the husband, on hearing his wife cheating (she had already cheated multiple times), should have either grabbed his gun and killed them both or simply grabbed his stuff and headed for the attorneys office. Who needs a cheating slut for a wife? Thanks to JPB for not finishing that story.

IF YOU HAVE A FANTASY-FETISH

don't be a braggart. TK U MLJ LV NV