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The Sub In Me

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by Anonymous

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by hottchic05/02/11

I gave you a 5*

Often short can be sweet.

PS I wouldn't want to be a dom really but I might like to be a sub together with you LOL

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by vrosej1005/03/11

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As a poem, it makes a great piece of prose.

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by estragon05/04/11

Agree with vrosej

Pretty emotion, but not poetry.

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