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Birthday Surprise Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/08/13

Too late for a brain transplant.

This kind of story results from a person born with a missing brain.

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by Anonymous08/08/13

Just move along, folks!

Nothing to see here! This story was dead on arrival. No plot, no eroticism, no interesting characters.

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by Anonymous08/08/13

nice to see

people who are slow getting along with each other you fucking loser.

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by Anonymous08/08/13

Is this what you guys think about while you work at McDonalds all day?

You just returned from offshore? Is that your mom's basement?

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by Lickideesplit08/08/13

Get a real life

Life is just a bowl of (deflowered) cherries! And cucumbers!

2*

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by x_witless_x08/09/13

Not in my genre. A little too fucking simplistic.

thanks. 2*

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by Anonymous09/24/13

Toys and cheaters run amok

And not in a good way.

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