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by twelveoone05/03/11

I gave it a five

Here is a piece of advice, it is not a good idea to submit too many at one time, tell your muse to shut up, and you take control, of polishing and editing. Also, crowding the shelf space with your product, has a tendency for readers not to take it serious.
You got the five, and if you wish, delete the comment with my blessing.

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by twelveoone05/04/11

Consider

a change from magical to mechanical, limbs to joints.

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by bulltlr05/05/11

5

made me smile....

I agree with twelveoone... mechanical would make more sense!

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