I am beginning to love waking up to these chapters.It starts and ends in all the right places giving just a bit but not the full tilt, anticipation is so good for them. Gorgeous, as always!
Da-amn. *fanning myself and trying to catch my breath* I'm sitting here grinning like an idiot and rolling my shoulders and neck around to release the tension....and I LOVE IT!! Please tell me we don't have long to wait on the next chapter. I read on your blog you almost had the ending the way you wanted and almost done with editing and should be posting quicker. I hope so, but, I understand how life gets in the way. :-) You always deliver so I will just have to be patient. And, I am still hoping for the top ten lists. lol :-))
Reminds me of the old serial Westerns in the movies!
Your knack for setting the scene and letting it build and then BAM, Stay tuned for the next chapter!
Very descriptive, well written, I'll be on edge until the next installment!
... with the teasing. ;) Glad to see Mina's willing to take her chances. And how lucky is Drew to get a woman who's a professional cook? :)
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Anonymous05/05/11
WOW
Enough said but this was the best chapter by far! And really drew wake up and see your brother loves to cook, maybe Mina can give him that little shove :D college isn't for everyone! Keep up the fantastic work mugsy!!
I've been waiting for Drew to get his own story and you have more than delivered, Mugsy. I'm loving the increasing tension between Drew and Mina as well as the way the relationship between the brothers is developing. I'm sure you'll deliver a final chapter with all the skill you normally bring.
I am loving this build of sexual frustration and extremely happy he left.... He is thinking about Mina and her feelings not just his needs and wants!
This is quickly becoming my fav story of yours!
The way to a mans heart is through his stomach I think Mina bypassed that from the first time he saw her! I love that each time they grow closer something interrupts them. Glad that she is giving him a shot and taking that chance with him :)
I've been reading your stories for a while and just want to say thanks! I've enjoyed every one and can't wait to see how this one ends!!! Just thank you and loving melting the ice with pennlady xx
i've already told you that love your hockey stories, and that i'm a dedicated hockey fan! but a little sad news for you, but great for me......................the lightning beat the caps in 4 games for the play-offs!!! next up?........perhaps the bruins!........................keep up your good stories, please!!!!! may be 75 yrs old and single, but not dead!!!!!!!!!!!.........................jim
For keeping us on the edge of our seats. I don't know how I can wait till next week for the next edition of Drew and Mina. Also waiting for Drew to help Mina open her own restaurant with Carter as an assistant. Keep us guessing tho.
Even though the sexual interrupting is killing me, I can't wait for it to actually happen. Because when it does, it will not only be passionate but it will be HOT!
It's ridiculous how my cheeks hurt from grinning at my screen.
I've read the last couple chapters at once, and I'm really enjoying Drew and Mina's story. They're both great characters, and for whatever reason, it's just damn fun to read about them.
I like how you weave in the other characters - the story with Carter, the interplay with the various friends and couples, the friendly banter and camaraderie between team mates and friendships between the women - it's all good!
As always, you craft a wonderful story, and I'm looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing!
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Anonymous01/26/12
Exactly. My cheeks grin at ALL of the stories! So good!
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Anonymous03/13/12
I love this. Just like with all your stories, my cheeks are sore. I can't get enough of your writing.
English
No no no no
They could have waited til Hilary and Mark left. YOU didn't have to make us wait Musgy .... ahhhhhh.
Hottttt!
Phew! And they haven't even gone all the way yet! You are amazing....please don't keep us waiting too long :)
McYummy
I am beginning to love waking up to these chapters.It starts and ends in all the right places giving just a bit but not the full tilt, anticipation is so good for them. Gorgeous, as always!
Good God, Woman!
Da-amn. *fanning myself and trying to catch my breath* I'm sitting here grinning like an idiot and rolling my shoulders and neck around to release the tension....and I LOVE IT!! Please tell me we don't have long to wait on the next chapter. I read on your blog you almost had the ending the way you wanted and almost done with editing and should be posting quicker. I hope so, but, I understand how life gets in the way. :-) You always deliver so I will just have to be patient. And, I am still hoping for the top ten lists. lol :-))
Reminds me of the old serial Westerns in the movies!
Your knack for setting the scene and letting it build and then BAM, Stay tuned for the next chapter!
Very descriptive, well written, I'll be on edge until the next installment!
There you go again
... with the teasing. ;) Glad to see Mina's willing to take her chances. And how lucky is Drew to get a woman who's a professional cook? :)
WOW
Enough said but this was the best chapter by far! And really drew wake up and see your brother loves to cook, maybe Mina can give him that little shove :D college isn't for everyone! Keep up the fantastic work mugsy!!
i'm loving these two. they're simply adorable!
when's the next chapter due, tomorrow? (one can hope ;-) )
Oh, heck yes!
I've been waiting for Drew to get his own story and you have more than delivered, Mugsy. I'm loving the increasing tension between Drew and Mina as well as the way the relationship between the brothers is developing. I'm sure you'll deliver a final chapter with all the skill you normally bring.
love it....
I am loving this build of sexual frustration and extremely happy he left.... He is thinking about Mina and her feelings not just his needs and wants!
This is quickly becoming my fav story of yours!
The way to a mans heart is through his stomach I think Mina bypassed that from the first time he saw her! I love that each time they grow closer something interrupts them. Glad that she is giving him a shot and taking that chance with him :)
WOW!
Great Chapter! It is always a pleasure to read each one. Thanks Mugsy.
Thank you
I've been reading your stories for a while and just want to say thanks! I've enjoyed every one and can't wait to see how this one ends!!! Just thank you and loving melting the ice with pennlady xx
congrats, again!!!!!
i've already told you that love your hockey stories, and that i'm a dedicated hockey fan! but a little sad news for you, but great for me......................the lightning beat the caps in 4 games for the play-offs!!! next up?........perhaps the bruins!........................keep up your good stories, please!!!!! may be 75 yrs old and single, but not dead!!!!!!!!!!!.........................jim
Good setup...
For keeping us on the edge of our seats. I don't know how I can wait till next week for the next edition of Drew and Mina. Also waiting for Drew to help Mina open her own restaurant with Carter as an assistant. Keep us guessing tho.
She's back!
Yet another great chapter Mugsy. Can't wait for the rest.
OMG!
OMG OMG OMG!! I freaking LOVE this :D you freaking rock dude.. ette* I NEHEEEEED MORE.. I'm so excited right now, it's ridiculous.. -grins- Keep it up
I love these stories, and I'm not even a hockey fan! Love how this story is building the anticipation, I can't wait to read more!!!!!!
Ahh! So close!
I'm loving it. I have yet to watch more than 5 minutes of a hockey game but I love your Ice stories! I could definitely be Drew's fan :)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Love your stories!!!
I am a hockey fan, but it doesn't matter if you are or not your stories are great!
Ahhh
Even though the sexual interrupting is killing me, I can't wait for it to actually happen. Because when it does, it will not only be passionate but it will be HOT!
You just had to bring in my Blackhawks!
Regardless, I'm loving the pace of this story! Can't wait till the next chapter!
KC
I love this story, please finish.
This is painful
It's ridiculous how my cheeks hurt from grinning at my screen.
I've read the last couple chapters at once, and I'm really enjoying Drew and Mina's story. They're both great characters, and for whatever reason, it's just damn fun to read about them.
I like how you weave in the other characters - the story with Carter, the interplay with the various friends and couples, the friendly banter and camaraderie between team mates and friendships between the women - it's all good!
As always, you craft a wonderful story, and I'm looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing!
Exactly. My cheeks grin at ALL of the stories! So good!
I love this. Just like with all your stories, my cheeks are sore. I can't get enough of your writing.
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