Cry Little Sister Ch. 04

No no no no, not again

you're the second writer on this site too, in 2 days to do this to me. YOU could have written a little more! I'm in AGONY.

Oh yeah!!

You were so right about the tease part!! I love love love this story. Please put up another chapter right now. I want more!!!

Augh! Will the teasing never end?!

I enjoyed your reinforcing of Jason's iron clad stance about Jill being off limits, and adding Kellan as someone-in-the-know was a nice touch.

Though I also feel that if Jill really did openly dig Rory, I can't imagine Jason being that outspoken against it if he sees how infatuated the couple are with one another.

Then again, it isn't love without tribulation.

OMG!!

What are you doing to me!! LOL!! You get me super excited that they finally see each other again and now I have to wait!! AHHHHH!!! ^_^

Love, love, love this story!! Not that I'm rushing you or anything, but I hope the next chapter comes soon! ^_^

Finally...hurray...hurray...*****

Anticipation

Remember the song of the same title. It has it's own value and is well used here to provide some fun, some author to reader tease, and a natural break.

Going well, thank you.

I can't wait for the next chapter!! Write it FAST!!

Feel free

Feel free to post the next chapter tomorrow. Or Sunday if you're feeling indolent.

agreed!

I have to agree with Anonymous, about posting tomorrow or Sunday if you're feeling inolent. Great story!

Don't quit now!

If you quit now, I'll personally hunt you down and feed you to the residents at the Reptile Gardens!!(lol) This is really getting good, I quit reading another story to come read this one.

Another cracking chapter!

I'm really enjoying the story, it's well worth the wait for each chapter (though I'd be delighted as well if you posted the next chapter tomorrow or Sunday ;) I'm loving your writing.

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!!!

What?

Another tease? Suspense? It's murder plain & simple! With every chapter I loose a piece of my heart!

totally delightful!

such a wonderful story- love your writing

Next chapter, please!!!

I'm surprised Casey didn't figure it out, too, but I'm sure it won't be long until she does. I'm surprised that Kellan was so observant and sensitive. I liked it. Bring on the next Ch.

Hurry!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE!!!!!! I'm dying here!!!

LOL

I love this story!!

More please. Soon.

LOL

Great Series

Good characters, good story line adds up to excellent.

You stopped!

How could you end it JUST LIKE THAT!? Oh that's cruel. Terribly teasing! I'm absolutely loving every single bitty bit of this story right now and I can't wait till you bring out the next chapter! Please don't make your adoring fans wait too long ;)

Write another chapter soon!

I don't know if I can stand the wait!

Awesome Story!

Keep up the good work, Awesome Story! :)