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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/04/11

Look

"for a my breath." if you are going to play Snookie, probably reads better as "for my a breath". Awright enuff. "meet halfway to heaven." sorry you had a problem with the Led Zeppelin background music. Ahhh. This comes alive:
He kisses my smile
still questioning his
intentions, his fingers
follow tender trails
that find me fighting
for a my breath.
S2 shines, as bright as your norther lights. S1 and S3, well this material is tough to be new, isn't it? They aren't bad.
A 5

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by live4passion05/04/11

glimpses

revealing in-sights. i enjoyed the glimpse

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