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Divine Intimacy

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by PrettyPinkPearl05/07/11

Nice Premise

Your story idea is fabulous. But....get an editor to help you! They can help you learn to write with a natural flow by showing you corrections that, once learned, will come naturally. DONT STOP WRITING!!!

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