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by twelveoone05/04/11

You do

know stars and bars can be read two ways? I'm not too happy with the ending, it dips and is a little expected. I fived. Just glad to see you writing. Zero with a rebel yell, would have been exciting, but what the hell, it would start saying something else.

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