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by cheetahgrl_0705/07/11

I would love to read more

Seems like a good story plot would love to read more

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by Mermaid218905/08/11

interesting cant wait to see more

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by Anonymous05/08/11

Excited!

First chapter and I'm already excited about it. Please give us more!

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by Anonymous05/08/11

i hope

i hope this good start will be followed by the next chapters. I like your pace - n

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by Anonymous05/08/11

Very tempting!

Nice beginning, I really hope you go on with the story. Good luck and thank you!

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by Anonymous05/13/11

im already lusting for more...

The details about the little things are just as important as the big ones. I can't wait to see how these characters develop. Don't leave me hanging for too long :)

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by Anonymous05/18/11

Sounds great so far

But please don't let him be married. Let the woman that called him be a pushy pack member.

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by katgoddess105/21/11

Interesting so far, although it's really hard to get a feel for a story from a single brief chapter. Keep writing. and we'll see how it goes.

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by Anonymous06/26/11

Whyyy!!!! why must it end, need the next chapter soon ppppllllleeeezzz

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by lheyra07/16/11

now im interested...

please dont stop! ...would it be too much to ask for a writer on this site to finish a wonderful story? you have a wonderful first chapter. keep up the good work! I can only hope you will be unlike so many others who write extremely well only to never finish. what ever you do, dont stop. write for yourself and not for the comments/feedback. that is almost the only way to avoid writers block. I'll definitely be checking in from time to time in hopes of new chapters :)

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by Anonymous08/01/11

mno

Please write more. The history started great.

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by Anonymous08/31/11

write more because your story is great so far. I really like it so please continue

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by Alpha_Marm10/15/11

An interesting beginning

You have laid a good foundation with this story. I can see this going into several chapters. Good eye for character development and details.

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by Anonymous12/31/11

Thanks....

Looking for a new paranormal romance to read. Glad to see you have started so well...please do continue :)

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by maxd0106/10/13

Gah, to short. Nice start but longer would have been much better. It gives some detail but not enough. Keep going though.

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by Mevanvy09/06/13

Where did his cell phone go when he shifted?

Petty curiosity! Don't worry about it. Not integral to the story. I may figure it out later anyway. :D

Good work! Many werewolf stories are often really cookie-cuttered, but yours has a wonderful original feel to it. You should keep at it.

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