New Life Ch. 04

Terrific, keeps getting better and better!!

the protagonist is a bit of a whiner.

Wonderful

Your series has me interested for sure. I appreciate the ethical dellima that your protagonist experiences, including the "awakening" of his new identity.

Interesting

I like the twist, what he chose not to do himself the other controller made him do. We'll be interesting to see where this goes.

Sad it did not continue

This was getting to be a very interesting tale.

Not often do we get stories where the controllers tangle with the moral aspects of their power. It was really different to see someone struggle with their own desires. Having the 'other' set him on a path of immorality was a great way to resolve this but it really seemed to need a continuation.

I really want to see the good guy in him win. But it seems the story was abandoned before the conflict resolved. AT least that is how it reads to me.

Oh well. What do you want for free? Still a great partial story. I will have to read more of nightspy81's work