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by Anonymous

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by bulltlr05/05/11

5

I guess that all depends on who your kissing!

Just so you know lips can also be wet from licking ;)

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by twelveoone05/08/11

The end

reads like a 50's horror movie, or a PSA movie. THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS...
DUCK UNDER THE COVERS, A5 for those thoughts, I do like to amuse myself in strange ways.

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by butters05/08/11

like icebergs growling

visceral line, adding depth to the cool disassociation (born of nerves?) and then the sudden and dramatic liquefaction... s'good

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