All Comments on 'Inner Black Swan'

I haven't seen Black Swan the movie (yet) However i hope to eventually.

However despite not having seen the movie i am glad to say that i didn't have to see the movie to enjoy this story.

It was very cleverly planned out and written.

I also like the idea of Natalie Portman being submissive.

I don't know how many stories there are out there of Natalie Portman being a lesbian submissive however this is the first one i have read and regardless of weather there are lots or not i would definatly like to see more.

Maybe somewhere down the line you could do a series of stories in which Mila does what she said she was going to do and write about how her friends used Natalie?

Anyway great story definatly 5 stars worthy.

It goes without saying, but you are a god of lesbian porn. Another amazing story!

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a bit more subtle, Ms. Portman could have put up a little more resistance before turning into a submissive lesbian slut, but that is a matter of taste; I thought the author put together a good story. The flow is good, the description of the sex compelling, and the writing clear. I look forward to the rest of the story.