All Comments on 'Destined to Be Together'

hottest shit ive ever read!!!!!!!!

Please write more!

This sounds more like a shemale than futanari. Still enjoyable though.

This was pretty hot. I liked that you actually had them form a friendship first, but I liked the sex too. My fave fantasy is hooking up with a hot dickgirl who spews a bucket of cum. :)

this should definitely have a few more chapters added to it

This was a really great little story, though one thing stuck out to me:

I think you've misused the word 'excrement'...

...a torrent of thin excrement. Definition is - "waste matter discharged from the body especially : feces."

Otherwise not at all bad overall but that bit lingers in my mind. Far from the best I've read but enough to stir things.

Should you opt to continue with this tale then please also define Sam - futanari or shemale? Makes a lot of difference as to how readers perceive the story.