Sisters Under Covers Ch. 01

nice story need more

you should get you and your sister involved with your mother, then maybe your daddy if you need help contact seve461@yahoo.co.uk

Twisted sisters

Very well written, engaging and sensitively written first chapter. Good characterisation, a nice build up to the next instalment with some built in tension and hints at what may be coming later. Well worth reading.

Great start

Nice setup, enjoyed it very much! Lokking forward to chapter 2.

Nice and gentle

A good beginning to what I hope will be more erotic adventures between the two. PLease keep it to the sisters and their friends. Please keep the guys out of it.

watch your tenses

Check your tenses, shifting from present to past is a distraction. Nice Story.

A FAMILY AFFAIR

Get it on and bring their mother in and then their father perhaps catching the three of them out and and being seduced to join them

wow

I have to question myself. I've never been turned on by a piece of incest work, but, Lord have mercy, I do believe that I am now! Good work! It definitely needs some editing, but it is a good beginning.

Thanks for this one

Very nicely constructed story, especially good considering the lack of editor. I'm looking forward to more in this vein. Thanks for your efforts, keep up the good work.

Don't add the father.

Add Mom and keep it a sapphic love fest.

more character development please!

Don't go making the situation more complicated until your readers have a solid understanding of the two major characters you've introduced so far. Lesbian incest is only an interesting area to explore if there are real chracters behind it, otherwise it may as well just be two random people screwing.

Intense

Must continue. Always keep it slow and deliberate. Add mom, then mom's sister then a multii-way as a finish. No men allowed

More, much more! I little more detail on the girls would be nice too

Excellent

Loved the slow burn, the tension and the gentleness. Can't wait to read more from you.

A real turn-on

I remained hard almost from the opening line...

brilliant keep on writing

WOW !!

Your writing skills made me feel like I was right there, experiencing all of that with you.
Regarding your editor, you don't need their help in my opinion. Just keep writing....PLEASE !! 5 Stars from me.

This is a great start to what promised to be a great series. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for chapter 2

great story start.. can't wait for the next chapter.. keep it up.

yes!

keep it going!

YES!!!!

please keep it going

Awesome!!!

That is all.

Nicely done

Agree with the general sentiment that this needs at least one more chapter, hopefully one long enough for Corey to explain what suddenly prompted her to make a move on Taylor, and for Taylor to explore her own reactions.

Awesome, keep it going

I have to agree with all the comments about at least another chapter. Would love to see some more character developement. Maybe get another set of sisters involved or heck, maybe even Mom too. Don't get carried away with turning a great story into a sexual extravaganza. Keep it light and erotic.

Great story

Please add another chapter. I can wait to hear how the sisters become even closer.

Great Story

I do hope that you add more to the story. It drew me in and I'm sure the next installment will do exactly the same.

I want to read chapter 2 & 3 & ....

Loved it! Would love to see more!

Awesome. More please

Amazing

This was one of the best ones ive read hands down. what happens next?!

Awesome!

Loved it!

Nice

Excellent! Excellent! I gotta read more!

plz continue the story, it was REALLY good ! :)

BRILLIANT

you must continue this story

Beautiful

That was so nice. Sweet love.

you should definitely continue the story.

Very erotic! Please continue!

one of the best i have read, please continue!

one of the best stories I have read, you MUST continue this story!

SEXY

This is the best one yet. Totally continue! This is so hot lol I luv it!

Keep going!

What happens next??

Please continue

This NEEDS to be continued. This is one of the best lesbian stories on here.

It was amazing

I really think u should continue, but try 2 make the next 1 longer

Really need to continue this story.

1 0f d gr8est stories here plz continue wid it

Yes

Please continue, really hot!

WONDERFUL

So erotic good storyline.

Amazing

Begging you to continue, so good.

Such a turn on

Love this story!
Need to continuou it!

loved

keep writing the story I would like to read the endig if there is one.

please continue

please comtinue this story it is wone of them ost erotic stories id ever heard so please continue it PLEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well done!

Excellent story, please continue! I'm sure Taylor is excited to return the favor for her beautiful and sexy older sister. They'll have to be sneaky since they both live at home but it will be worth it I'm sure :)
Great stuff!!!