All Comments on 'Accidentally Seduced'

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GaminaGaminaalmost 13 years ago
short

like the idea but it was way to short to even begin getting me wet;.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12almost 13 years ago
i'm with Gamina

I was starting to like it a lot, but it ended so short. Still very good, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I enjoyed it

Lot of dialogue and not much story. Get a little more detailed (especially on the "spicy" parts) and I think it would kick it up a notch

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Rushed ending ruined it.

Warp speed conclusion after some half-way decent suspense and build-up. The sex-scene had little to no detail or description and was over faster than it took me to write this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
don't blow your load!

The set-up was hot and made me interested to see how it all played out but then you rushed it at the end and it was over before I knew it! I think you have promise as a writer and should consider adding more detail to this story. It really was a good premise and I think you have the talent to make it a lot better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome!

This is awesome! Keep going~

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