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love it :D
the sounds delight my ear, the images my mind, the language my spirit...
I shall swallow you in luscious words
unleash a tide of doubt
bite off brass buttons
breathe desire into the band of your briefs
cup what you have protected
secure perimeters with evasive action
I shall sow your hips with my need
engrave your ribs with my tongue
there's originality of phrasing that can't but help appeal, and a lone quibble of do you need 'with my teeth'? if you want to keep 'teeth' for its aural links, perhaps something like 'bite off brass buttons with teeth ignoring pleas for amnesty' ?
teeth
Chipbutty - thanks, great suggestion. You are right, I don't need the teeth. But I have such nice sharp teeth it's hard to resist adding them in...(smile). Your suggestions are most appreciated, as always.
A sailin'
A sailin'
to an H we go
Really?
Defend.
I did not vote, but question, I see one comment, one reply. tell me why.
this time i voted
5ed,
liked the teeth
god what an animal
HANDLE WITH CARE
the servicemans uniform is sacrosanct, TK U MLJ LV NV
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