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Gasping Ridiculous Quiet Things

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/21/11

this is my dream cum true

As a man I always want my woman to do this and she down its good to know how she feels when she is doing it and I'm not responsive

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by Anonymous05/21/11

as I read this

It is the middle of the night and I too am wide awake and dripping wet. Husband is snoring, perhaps I should...

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by AreaMan05/21/11

Nice piece of writing!

Love how the chopped sentences convey the ragged pace of what's happening. Oh ... and it's totally hot, too!

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by Anonymous10/22/11

mmm...

so good that I thought it was written just for me...

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by Cherry_Rose04/14/12

Fantastic Story

Well impressed by this story, its raw and sexy and god knows how many times I've laid in the night, thinking just this...

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by condor6206/13/13

Superb

Wow, I know what I will be dreaming about tonight.
This is a great storyline, but the writing was even better. Excellent pacing.
Thanks for sharing this.

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by Anonymous07/02/16

Surreptitiously sensual

Love your straight forward description of a universal fantasy! Well done.

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